《沪江网校雅思》雅思口语 7 怎么达到?

2018-10-31 15:33 稿源:用户投稿  0条评论

Well, 其实这个问题很好回答, 原因很简单, 只要我们可以try our best 去无限接近雅思口语考试的四项评分标准,我们的分数自然会稳步上升(考官就是依赖这四项分数的总和除以四给出大家最后的口语分数的)。

BUT 除了这些以外, 我们还能做神马捏?(考官, 你还想怎样?!)

接下来, 我就以Part 3 当中考官的一个问题为例, 为大家讲解一下7分的答案到底长得神马样子, 或者说, 除了具备棒棒的发音,高逼格的词汇,牛叉的句型以及流利的口语之外, 考官还期待点啥?

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Part 3: It seems that most elder people don’t like to go to movies, why is that?

(似乎大多数老人不喜欢去电影院看电影, 这是为什么呢?)

大家看到这个问题后, 脑海中的答案可能是这个样子滴:

答案1:

Well, it is mainly because they think it is too costly to watch a movie at a theater. They would probably watch it at home. You know, they have gone through some hard times when they were young, so they are now quite frugal.

词汇亮点用costly 替代了expensive;go through 经历,经受(less common expression);frugal 节省的, 替代了 save money。

语法亮点it is mainly because…表语从句; they think...宾语从句; when...时间状语从句;

Have gone... 现在完成时态;so...原因状语从句。

关联性(逻辑性)直接回答问题本身-给出原因, 并给出进一步的原因做解释和拓展。

发音 请自行脑补, 哈哈哈哈哈

答案2:

Well, I think the most important reason is that they are not into movies, which means they do not even watch any when they are at home. For instance, what my grandpa enjoys doing the most is to play Chinese chess with his mates.

词汇亮点:用be into 喜欢, 替代了like/enjoy/be interested in等等;for instance 例如,替代了 for example。

 语法亮点:I think the most important reason is …复合从句(宾语从句里镶嵌了一个表语从句); which means...非限制性定语从句(改述); what my grandpa enjoys...what 引导的主语从句。

关联性(逻辑性):直接回答问题本身-给出原因,以举例的方式给出相关细节解释和拓展。

 发音: 请自行脑补, 哈哈哈哈哈

答案3:

Well, From my perspective, the reason is that the majority of them think it is too noisy to watch a movie at a theater so they would prefer to do that at home. And that also explains why they tend to find a quiet place like a tea house to hang out with friends.

 词汇亮点:用from my perspective 替代了 I think; 用 the majority 替代了most;tend to 替代了使用过的 prefer to;用 hang out with替代了 spend time with 。

语法亮点:the reason is …表语从句; so ...原因状语从句; that also explains why.... why 引导的宾语从句。

关联性(逻辑性):直接回答问题本身-给出原因,并进一步给出相关细节解释和拓展。

发音: 请自行脑补, 哈哈哈哈哈

答案4:

Well, In my opinion, one obvious reason is that elder people find it inconvenient to travel to the theater for a movie. That is to say, they would not bother to go so far just for a movie, and it is especially true for those who live so far from a movie theatre.

词汇亮点:用obvious 替代了 important; inconvenient 不方便的(使用了否定前缀in);用travel to 替代了go to;that is to say 也就是说(口语地道表达);not bother to do 懒得做XXX(口语地道表达)。

语法亮点:one obvious reason is …表语从句; find sth/sb + 形容词, 固定句式表达;those who live... who 引导的定语从句。

关联性(逻辑性):直接回答问题本身-给出原因,用“改述”的方式给出相关细节做进一步解释和拓展。

发音:请自行脑补, 哈哈哈哈哈

So...

看完这几个答案, 大家感觉如何? 有木有觉得答案还是很不错的呢?

YES, 整体还是很不错的。。。。

然而, 这些答案也仅仅只能考到6分而已!

要想达到7分或者8 分。。。。。。

Come and look, 来, 瞧一下高分答案长得啥样?(考官的期待还很高滴。。。)

高分答案展示:

Well, the reasons might vary. For instance, some may think it costs too much money, and others may dislike the noise in the cinema, and apparently, we still have some who think it causes too much trouble to travel so far just to watch a movie.

However, I believe the most fundamental reason is that elder people are not the target audience for those who make movies, which means movie producers don’t make movies that could really interest those elder people as they hold the stereotype that elder people won’t spend money on movies, but it is probably not true.

答案解析:

大家要想取得更高的分数,除了在词汇,语法,发音,流利度以及关联性等方面下功夫以外, 还必须考虑如何给出更具有创造力的答案, 或者说, 给出问题比较本质的,深层次的原因等等, 因为具有创造力的回答会让考官眼前一亮,感受到你的独立思考能力和创造力,而不仅仅只是为了回答问题而给出的“平庸的”答案。

要做到这一点, 建议大家平时多读书, 多思考;遇到问题是多维度思考,努力尝试,看是否可以找到更多有创造力,有创新的解决方案呢?!

这次就这些了, 感谢。

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